? 服務||Yahoo!奇摩 知識+ 教育學習 如何做 我要發問 發表 我要發問 熱門: 肺癌前兆 星座佔有慾 台灣老街 快解辣 排毒 主題 天涼泡湯趣 用手機上知識+ 知識搜尋 知識+ > 教育學習> 語言文字> 英文 加入追蹤 轉寄朋友 友善列印 知識問題| (急 20點)句子改錯 發問者:RT ( 初學者 5 級) 發問時間:2008-12-13 16:57:05 解決時間:2008-12-21 11:43:03 解答贈點:22 ( 共有 1 人贊助 ) 回答:3 評論: 0 意見: 1 [ 檢舉 ] 網友正面評價 0% 共有 0 人評價We can’t use our cell phones on the plane, so let’s call home now? Would you help Jen? She can’t opens this window. Sure. Will please you ask her to wait a few minutes? Could you understood Mr. Brown, or did he talk too fast? Icould understand him, but now I couldn’t read my notes! How about to ride our bikes to the park and playing basketball? Could you please call me yesterday? It’s cold, so let’s not walking to work today. Is that a bus stop, or can we parking here? We can’t parking here, so why don’t we park across the street? Last year, I couldn’t use a computer, but now I can sending e-mail. I’m sorry, but passengers mayn’t leave their seats now. I must not take math, but my teacher said I should take it. Shoulds Roberto call you tonight, or would you rather call him? I like the food at Casa del Sol, but I’d rather Thai food tonight.. Passengers must to wear belts, or the driver could get a ticket. It can be cold on the plane, so you ought to bringing a sweater. We should be at the airport by 2:00. What time have we to leave? Students don’t have to smoke, but they can chew gum. I don’t have to dress up, but I’d not rather wear jeans. Would you like to have coffee, or do you rather have tea? In Argentina you not ought to eat on the bus. Should I leave my umbrella home, or may it rain today? 麻煩幫我改錯 如果方便的話 可否請會的人 以對的形式全部寫ㄧ遍(最晚下禮拜四早上) 最佳解答網友票選 回答者:erica ( 初學者 5 級 ) 回答時間:2008-12-13 19:55:26 [ 檢舉 ] We can’t use our cell phones on the plane, so let’s call home now? 1.# 這句ok 2.#Could you help Jen? She can’t open this window. (could較有禮 // can後加原形動詞) 3.#Sure. Would you please ask her to wait a few minutes? (would較有禮 ) 4.# Can you understand Mr. Brown’s talk ? Did he talk too fast? (詢問當事人是否有聽懂Mr. Brown的談話,以現代式較好) 5.# I can understand , but I can’t read my notes now. (這句延續上句話題,一樣以現代式較好) 6.# How about riding our bikes to the park and playing basketball? (how about後接名詞或動名詞) Could you please call me yesterday?(不太懂你想問什麼,應該是請人明天call你吧?) 7.# Could you please me tomorrow? 8.# It’s cold, so let’s not walk to work today. (let後接原形動詞) 9.# Is that a bus stop , or can we park here?( can後加原形動詞) We can’t parking here, so why don’t we park across the street? 10.# We can’t park here. why don’t we park across the street ? (如沒特別要求合併一句的話,分兩句会好些) 11.# Last year, I didn’t know to use a computer, but now I can send e-mail.(應該這樣寫会更讓人明白你想表達-去年我還不會操作電腦,而不是不使用) 12.# Excuse me. Passenger can’t leave their seat now.( Excuse me有點像是起頭語,像中文的—不好意思,会比I’m sorry好;;因你要請乘客留在位子上,就不要用but[感覺是可以討價還價],而是直接下達命令句,,can又會比may更好,,以單數強調全部) 參考資料 myself 2008-12-13 19:56:55 補充 13.# I didn’t want to take math, but my teacher said I have to take it.(這句應表達我不想修數學,但老師叫我一定要修的意思) 14.#Would you like Roberto call you or you call him tonight ? (兩個句子能合併一起会更好) 15.# I like the food at Casa del Sol, but I prefer to eat Thai food tonight.(rather-倒不如 / prefer-較喜歡,依句意用prefer較好) 參考資料 myself 2008-12-13 19:57:25 補充 16.# Passenger must fasten their seat belts, otherwise the driver may get a ticket.( 以單數強調全部//fasten是繫緊的意思//otherwise 可用or替代//may可能) 17.# It could be clod on the plane, so you ought to bring your sweater.(因是預測所以用could be較好) 參考資料 myself 2008-12-13 19:57:42 補充 18.# We should arrive at the airport before 2:00. What time should we leave?(抵達用arrive較好//詢問應該做的事用should較好) 19.# Students can’t smoke, but (they)can chew gum.(they可省略,因同主詞) 20.# I won’t wear jeans, even though I don’t need to dress up.(即使我不需要盛裝,我也不會穿牛仔褲-放前面強調) 參考資料 myself 2008-12-13 19:57:54 補充 21.# Would you like tea or coffee?(這樣最簡單) 21.# Would you prefer a cup of tea or coffee?(亦可) 22.# In Argentina, you can’t eat on the bus.(can’t強調不能做) 23.# It might rain today, should I leave my umbrella at home?(這句我不太懂你要表達的意思,所以我改成—今天似乎会下雨,那我應該將傘留在家中嗎?) 希望對你有幫助 參考資料 myself 2008-12-15 19:38:46 補充 11.# Last year, I didn’t know how to use a computer, but now I can send e-mail.(應該這樣寫会更讓人明白你想表達-去年我還不會操作電腦,而不是不使用,漏打how~ sorry~~) 相關詞: if icould歌詞 [ 快速連結 ] 其它回答( 2 ) | 意見( 1 ) | 評論( 0 ) 發表你的評價 你的評價 發表評價: 正面 普通 負面 評價內容: 發表 取消 加入追蹤 轉寄朋友 友善列印 馬上按讚 加入 Yahoo! 奇摩 知識+ 粉絲團 必看!精選最熱門話題知識 非了解不可的精彩知識問答 什麼?連這個都有人會知道 包羅萬象!知識強者教會你 不會做?來這裡找就通通會 沒想到!竟然會有這些密技 相關問答 [ 其他廠牌 ]一台IPHONE連接兩台不同的電腦 急...... [ 其他廠牌 ]2台iphone共用1個帳號更新後卻資料重疊了怎麼辦? [ 原聲帶 ]求Ronan Keating-Fires中文歌詞.. [ 西洋音樂 ]一首西洋樂歌詞英翻中 [ 英文 ]肯德基爺爺的名言翻譯 [ 英文 ]國外網站購物翻譯請幫忙 更多 其他回答(2) 意見(1) 相關評論(0) 001 回答者:奶爸 ( 初學者 1 級 ) 回答時間:2008-12-13 17:51:28 [ 檢舉 ] 第一句找不到錯誤說.... 2. Would you help Jen? She can’t opens this window. Would you help Jen? She can’t open this window. can't 後面要加原形動詞 3. Sure. Will please you ask her to wait a few minutes? Sure. Will you please ask her to wait a few minutes? 4. Could you understood Mr. Brown, or did he talk too fast? Could you undersand Mr. Brown, or did he talk too fast? 5. I could understand him, but now I couldn’t read my notes! I could understand him, but now I can't read my notes! 6. How about to ride our bikes to the park and playing basketball? How about riding our bikes to the park and playing basketball? 7. Could you please call me yesterday? Could you please call me tomorrow? 8. It’s cold, so let’s not walking to work today. It’s cold, so let’s not walk to work today. 9. Is that a bus stop, or can we parking here? Is that a bus stop, or can we park here? 10. We can’t parking here, so why don’t we park across the street? We can’t park here, so why don’t we park across the street? 2008-12-13 17:52:11 補充 11. Last year, I couldn’t use a computer, but now I can sending e-mail. Last year, I couldn’t use a computer, but now I can send e-mails. 12. I’m sorry, but passengers mayn’t leave their seats now. I’m sorry, but passengers may not leave their seats now. 2008-12-13 17:52:21 補充 13. I must not take math, but my teacher said I should take it. 這句也找不到錯誤 14. Shoulds Roberto call you tonight, or would you rather call him? Should Roberto call you tonight, or would you rather call him? 2008-12-13 17:52:27 補充 15. I like the food at Casa del Sol, but I’d rather Thai food tonight.. I like the food at Casa del Sol, but I’d rather have/eat Thai food tonight.. 16. Passengers must to wear belts, or the driver could get a ticket. Passengers must wear belts, or the driver could get a ticket. 2008-12-13 17:52:42 補充 17. It can be cold on the plane, so you ought to bringing a sweater. It can be cold on the plane, so you ought to bring a sweater. 18. We should be at the airport by 2:00. What time have we to leave? We should be at the airport by 2:00. What time do/should we leave? 2008-12-13 17:52:49 補充 19. Students don’t have to smoke, but they can chew gum. 這句也找不到錯誤 20. I don’t have to dress up, but I’d not rather wear jeans. I don’t have to dress up, but I’d rather not to wear jeans. 不太確定他想表達什麼, 其實可以有蠻多改法的 2008-12-13 17:52:57 補充 21. Would you like to have coffee, or do you rather have tea? Would you like to have coffee, or would you rather have tea? 22. In Argentina you not ought to eat on the bus. In Argentina you ought not to eat on the bus. 2008-12-13 17:53:02 補充 23. Should I leave my umbrella home, or may it rain today? Should I leave my umbrella home, or might it rain today? 如果有問題請再補充, 我如果有再找到錯誤也會在寫 2008-12-13 17:54:38 補充 喔19應該是 Students can't smoke, but they can chew gum. 002 回答者:Emily ( 初學者 5 級 ) 回答時間:2008-12-13 18:14:46 [ 檢舉 ] We can’t use our cell phones on the plane, so let’s call home now? 這ㄧ句有點怪怪的,但我不知道你這句的中文意識。 Would you help Jen? She can’t opens this window. 沒錯。 Sure. Will please you ask her to wait a few minutes? 應該是; Sure. Will you please ask her to wait for a few minutes? Could you understood Mr. Brown, or did he talk too fast? 應該是; Do you understand what Mr. Brown said, or did he speak too fast? Icould understand him, but now I couldn’t read my notes! 應該是; I can understand him, but I can't read my notes! How about to ride our bikes to the park and playing basketball? 應該是; Should we ride our bikes to the park and play basketball? Could you please call me yesterday? 應該是; Can you call me today? or.. Did you call me yesterday? It’s cold, so let’s not walking to work today. 應該是; Maybe we don't walk to work today, because it's cold. Is that a bus stop, or can we parking here? 應該是; Is that a bus stop, or can we park here? We can’t parking here, so why don’t we park across the street? 應該是; We can't park here, so why don't we park our car across the street? Last year, I couldn’t use a computer, but now I can sending e-mail. 我不懂你這句的意識。 I’m sorry, but passengers mayn’t leave their seats now. 應該是; I'm sorry, but passengers can't leave their seats now. I must not take math, but my teacher said I should take it. 我不懂你這句的意識。 Shoulds Roberto call you tonight, or would you rather call him? 應該是; Should Roberto call you tonight, or you want to call him instead? I like the food at Casa del Sol, but I’d rather eat Thai food tonight.. It can be cold on the plane, so you ought to bring a sweater. We should be at the airport by 2:00. What time do we need to leave? Students can't smoke, but they can chew gum. I don’t have to dress up, but I won't wear jeans. Would you like to have coffee, or do you rather have tea? In Argentina you can't eat on the bus. 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